This is our final version, after many changes and a lot of last minute shooting!
I did a small commentary to go with it;
We also put the video on facebook and got feedback from people within the target audience age range:
We have also used some intertextual references, to Trick or Treat. When we were doing general research into the beginning of films, and we came across this, we liked the idea of the boy, gettings rejected by the girl. We liked the fact that he was a loner, signified as a bit of a geek, into horror, writing a diary. We pretty much took this as inspiration and made it into a rom com!